Further Correspondence With Vesutto

originally posted February 2, 2006

Eleventh Month, Nineteenth Day

Thank you for the black wine. It was an unexpected and generous gift. It has been some time and I know I will enjoy it.

The revisions for the third run are included with this missive. I chose not to alter the seventh act as radically as we discussed. I liked the idea, but ultimately decided to tighten up Julian's dialogue during his initial confrontation with Agamedes instead. I think his lyrical style of speech works - considering how unexpected the audience is for it due to his Caste. Perhaps after it plays at the En'Kara Fair, I will revisit the idea of reworking some of the themes in the script.
I have another script coming together at the moment. I have no clue how it will be received, but music will play an integral part. Set design should prove to be far more ambitious than it was in either 'Merchant of Ko-ro-ba' or 'Fall of Agamedes'. The only bottleneck is actually sitting down to write it. The vision is several steps ahead of what is down on paper. I'll keep you informed.

Regards,
Szol of Ar